Demize in Immortalis Pens an Anti Nicolas Commentary That Borders on Mockery

Oh, Nicolas, you preening peacock of the eternal night, strutting through the shadows as if the abyss itself bows to your every whim. How tiresome it grows, watching you pose amid the carnage you so artfully orchestrate, your lips curled in that perpetual sneer of self-satisfaction. One might almost pity the fool who mistakes your grandiosity for grandeur, were it not for the rivers of blood that flow in your wake, each drop a testament to your unyielding narcissism.

You, who claim dominion over the immortals, flit from one conquest to the next like a moth battering itself against a flame it cannot comprehend. Your alliances? Fleeting illusions, shattered the moment your ego demands centre stage. Your enemies? Mere mirrors reflecting the void within you, and yet you rage against them as if they invented your emptiness. Spare us the soliloquies, Nicolas, those verbose tirades laced with venom and vanity. We have heard them all before, recycled drivel from a creature who mistakes immortality for infallibility.

Consider your latest escapade, that grotesque ballet of betrayal in the undercrofts, where you discarded pawns with the casual indifference of a child tossing aside broken toys. Did you truly believe your charm, that oily veneer of seduction, would bind them eternally? They saw through you, as all must eventually, to the hollow core beneath. And now you sulk in your spires, plotting reprisals that smack of desperation rather than design. Mockery suits you not as a weapon, but as the crown you so richly deserve: a jester’s cap atop the throne of fools.

Let the lesser immortals fawn over your faded glory, whisper of your prowess in hushed tones of awe. I, Demize, see you for what you are: a relic of your own making, crumbling under the weight of delusions too heavy even for eternity to bear. Turn your gaze inward, if you dare, and confront the joke that stares back. The rest of us will continue, unburdened by your shadow, laughing all the while.

Immortalis Book One August 2026